No I am not deleting this , I have had enough of listening to whatever Ferhiyo wants she gets crap .
Here is the link people feel free to view it as many times as you wish :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8zzZ4wspIsI&feature=channel_video_title
Zainab Aljawahiri
Sunday, 1 May 2011
Sunday, 24 April 2011
Video comments
Hello ppl,
Here are a couple of comments emailed to me recently about our final trailer :
Dear Zainab
Here are a couple of comments emailed to me recently about our final trailer :
Dear Zainab
I saw the short film which you and your friends have produced and directed.I liked it so much because it reveals the unseen power in our life . People might name it with too many names , one of these is Ghost. The film very well shows mystery of the unknown . Actresses were marvelous ,as if they were in film industry for years. The editing was really good. Congratulation and I wish you all the best
Ala Bashir
(My Dad's really good friend)
Monday, 18 April 2011
Bloopers and updates
Hello Checkmates...
I wondered what Feo has done with our trailer since Ms Wigley saw it last Wednesday ... has she given the final version to Mr Babu on the following day ... did the voice over for the note ? I'm really unsure of what has been going on over the last couple of days ....
Feo - please ring me or text me something ..
Zainab :S - I'm confused .
P.S where did the bloopers go ? they are still not uploaded onto here ...
:/
I wondered what Feo has done with our trailer since Ms Wigley saw it last Wednesday ... has she given the final version to Mr Babu on the following day ... did the voice over for the note ? I'm really unsure of what has been going on over the last couple of days ....
Feo - please ring me or text me something ..
Zainab :S - I'm confused .
P.S where did the bloopers go ? they are still not uploaded onto here ...
:/
Friday, 8 April 2011
Final
I'm not sure what other parts need redoing apart from the title perhaps have that with a similar effect that was applied to the : we are all pawns in a queens game '
(WELL DONE EVERYONE - WE DID IT ) .
:) Zainab x
(WELL DONE EVERYONE - WE DID IT ) .
:) Zainab x
Wednesday, 6 April 2011
A trailer-just have a look at the techniques they use . + some posters .
Seeing as Ms wigley gave us feedback on Monday she stated that :
Inverted commos are needed in the reviews -clearly that is not the case .
The editing is on its final voyage ! .
The soundtracks are suited towards the target market .
Just a few bits and pieces left to do now .
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlaZfOiGaCU
Inverted commos are needed in the reviews -clearly that is not the case .
The editing is on its final voyage ! .
The soundtracks are suited towards the target market .
Just a few bits and pieces left to do now .
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlaZfOiGaCU
Scream 4 trailer : have a look at the conventions used :) .
:) Look at the use of :
fonts , pictures ,colours used , connotoations and denotation . I think we could perhaps use somethign from here in our own trailer ...(the ending perhaps..hint hint girls!)
Sunday, 3 April 2011
Track progress @6pm sunday !!
Hello ,
So far (zainab,siva and feo) have done most of the editing at Feo's.
New soundtrack has been implemented as the old one got a bit boring ! .
Credits - have been done
The voice over -has been recorded and added into the trailer .
Zainab Aljawahiri
Harpreet- your job is the camera angles when we reshoot the friends scene.
So far (zainab,siva and feo) have done most of the editing at Feo's.
New soundtrack has been implemented as the old one got a bit boring ! .
Credits - have been done
The voice over -has been recorded and added into the trailer .
Zainab Aljawahiri
Harpreet- your job is the camera angles when we reshoot the friends scene.
Saturday, 2 April 2011
Things for sunday
Ok here goes a lot...
Firstly the note - that siva holds I was thinking of doing an animation for that using that online title thing !! it might look good or bad or perhaps just to write it on a surface with black pen ... as an extra shot lasting 6 seconds maybe more .
The title is now done I have sent this to feo
The extra shots needed : Feo in the location !! (loo) .
The lighting has to be fixed if we want to redo those bits maybe at feo's .
The sound - is now done as well for the last bit ( last 10-20 seconds ) I showed it to siva on friday and she liked it :) .
One thing though sometone has to record the actual sound as I cant find it on youtube and i did download it of itunes -sorry for that !.
its called green t.v though its a channel .
Editing - this must all be done and dusted as a team of four !! on sunday as well .
Feo- I cant see the shopping list (LOL just joking)
Firstly the note - that siva holds I was thinking of doing an animation for that using that online title thing !! it might look good or bad or perhaps just to write it on a surface with black pen ... as an extra shot lasting 6 seconds maybe more .
The title is now done I have sent this to feo
The extra shots needed : Feo in the location !! (loo) .
The lighting has to be fixed if we want to redo those bits maybe at feo's .
The sound - is now done as well for the last bit ( last 10-20 seconds ) I showed it to siva on friday and she liked it :) .
One thing though sometone has to record the actual sound as I cant find it on youtube and i did download it of itunes -sorry for that !.
its called green t.v though its a channel .
Editing - this must all be done and dusted as a team of four !! on sunday as well .
Feo- I cant see the shopping list (LOL just joking)
Sunday, 20 March 2011
Monday, 14 March 2011
Friday, 4 March 2011
TRAILER...
There are few shots of people running in the forest.The use of sound is really good ,we could perhaps use that soundtrack when one of start running to create tension. Plus, the use of fonts in the trailer is quite good.
Sivagowsi
Sivagowsi
Monday, 28 February 2011
Flashback scene(StoryBoard)
Shot 1 : A mid-close up shot of Rose crying and looking up. (Dissolve ediiting)
Shot 1a: Rose and her friend walking and laughing...
Shot 2: Cross Cutting of the graveyard .

Shot 2a: close up of a gravestone
or

Shot 3: Crossing cutting to Rose's Friend in close up
Shot 4: Another shot of rose crying looking down.
Sivagowsi
Shot 1a: Rose and her friend walking and laughing...
Shot 2: Cross Cutting of the graveyard .
Shot 2a: close up of a gravestone
or
Shot 3: Crossing cutting to Rose's Friend in close up
Shot 4: Another shot of rose crying looking down.
Sivagowsi
Friday, 25 February 2011
Monday, 21 February 2011
How to make fake blood
we can just replace the corn syrup with honey or other gluey substance.
sivagowsi
Thursday, 17 February 2011
REMINDER…
Fliming schedule plan
Meeting at 1.30pm outside Ruislip woods on Friday 25/02/11 and we should finish the latest at 5pm.
ADDRESS: Hillingdon, Ruislip, Greater London HA4 7TY, UK (I think you take the E7 bus or something)
Minimum shots we should get done: 10/16 in 4hrs.
PROPS WE NEED FOR THE WOODS SCENE :
· SCHEUDLE (ZAINAB)
· SCRIPT(ZAINAB)
· MAKE UP(ZAINAB)
· BABY WIPES(FEO)
· TORCH AND BABY POWDER(FEO, ITS IN THE CAMERA BAG)
· TRIPOD (ZAINAB)
· FOOD COLOURING
· WATER
EXTRA SHOT:
v The three girls trips over when they are running .(5 sec)
OMG , click on this link : http://www.ruislipwoods.co.uk/foxes.htm
Sivagowsi
Wednesday, 16 February 2011
Progress Report
As a group , we have managed to film the shots of our protagonist Rose moving the chess pieces etc , and on monday we managed to complete the friendship scene , and at some stage today we will be shooting the best friend scene , until happy with shots . We will then start to add all the shots filmed so far into a programme which will enahance certain features ! .
Zainab x
Zainab x
Tuesday, 15 February 2011
SHOT : EXTRA
This could be one our extra shot; a shadow of Rose moving a chesspiece, this could help to create certain effects .
Sivagowsi
Monday, 14 February 2011
Trial 1- beginning part for the trailer
Draft: opening scenes of the trailer
Improved version:
This opening has a flow to it than the draft one.
EBI:
* The second shot should be extended abit
* Should of experimented with sound
*Editing
Sivagowsi
Sunday, 13 February 2011
Action plan for Monday 14th- Friday 18th of Feb! And Halfterm... (Ferhiyo)
Monday the 14th - Friday the 18th - Schedule!
:: There is a couple of things which I need to discuss with you all tomorrow!
Note: This week is our last week to use the school to film – so we need to get our acts together – film what we need to film, and start as soon, as we can.
Here is a list of what we need to do:
We need to re-film the friend scene again (It won’t take long so don’t worry, and this can be done anytime this week) – I thought of a much better setting, and I added extra dialogue to this scene, which I will share with you all tomorrow morning.
Make sure everything is taken out from the locker, by Friday! - the paints, and everything else that we will be using as iconographies!
I've got some screen fonts etc - credited by film review and others - I'll bring in my notebook tomorrow!
Friday 25th til Sunday the 27th - WE NEED TO...
Meet up, around 1:30-2:30pm, (we'll decide a meeting point) and make our way to Ruislip Woods - rehearse the scenes that we will be filming till it starts to get dark (We're going to keep re-filming if it is not so great, until it's perfect - I'm happy to stay until late - so we need to make sure everything is done correctly the first time round) - no laughing or messing about - I'm serious! I'm sure none of us what to make another trip to the woods in the dark!
Make sure you bring something to eat, as we're staying out there for quite a while - and BTW we cannot go out to purchase refreshments/lunch - cause that would be wasting time.
Bring your costumes/or wear them - it's up to you!
WHAT YOU WILL NEED TO BRING...
The obvious - Camera and Tripod!
The paints/symbols etc - needed for the treasure hunt!
The red food dye/colouring - ( Someone needs to buy that! )
Make-up/Make up wipes (Just incase we might need it).
Add a comment below/or edit this post if I have missed something out!
Again, sorry for coming across as bossy/instructing - We will all benefit from this in the end, I promise! (:
Wednesday, 9 February 2011
Thursday's lesson!
Anything that has been filmed ... please start to edit it out and put music together with it .... I will bring everything with me although I might not come to the lesson on time ... therefore .... Look at lighting in horror films VERY CAREFULLY ... ( i mean that ) , we need to see how to make lighting work in the woods for the forest scenes in ruislip woods during the holidays .
Secondly Put any filming done onto the blog -
Zainab x (good luck and please sort your differences out as a group ... ! )
Secondly Put any filming done onto the blog -
Zainab x (good luck and please sort your differences out as a group ... ! )
Thursday, 3 February 2011
Monday, 31 January 2011
Checkmate trailers: (Only if we need some extra ideas, since we do have to shoot, 100 or more shots) - Ferhiyo
Wouldn't you call this, plagiarism from our minds ;-) (LOL)
On screen text: And an idea, I had for how we should write/show it. (Ferhiyo)
Screen text: WE'RE ALL PAWNS IN THE QUEENS GAME - We should use the colours of the chess pieces (Cream and Black) or (Cream and Brown) for the text, as it would have more of a meaning, and would develop our narrative a little bit further (I believe).
A possible idea:: (I was thinking, that we could use some of these signs, and put a big black cross on it, to illustrate that, the protagonist hates, the insignificant players (Us). (The pawns of course, and the other pieces which have an unimportant value to them e.g. the Bishop, and rock?)
Stick them on the trees, as a symbol of death maybe? or the fear/danger of loosing the game of getting away with what, we've done. (The killing of, Rose's brother)
Ferhiyo -
Script for Checkmate
Script - (Checkmate)
· Shot 6 Rose:
“I’ll kill those bitches”
Or
“I’ll show them who the Queen in this game is”
· Shot 13 Willow:
“Kate!? Nicole?!”(Screaming)
· Shot 14 Kate:
“Oh My God”(Screaming)
· Shot 15 Nicole
“Argh”(Screaming)
· Shot 20 Nicole:
“Checkmate!”(Slowly and nervously) Check…..Mate…
· Shot 21 Rose:
“They will pay for it”
· Shot 23 Rose:
“This is not over until I get them back”
Shot 25 Rose:
“They all peasants in my game”
Shot 33 Willow/Kate/Nicole:
“WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?”
Shot 32 Rose:
“you knew this was coming”
Shot 39 Rose:
“I know your here! Show yourself to the Queen, your majesty”
Sivagowsi
Monday, 24 January 2011
Pictures of character and setting ... Take one
Character Name : Rose , The Protagonist ... Scary and deceitful , out for revenge ....
Ruislip woods - a place where no-one can hide .... One of the settings that we will use to film a part of the shot .. running scene . Long shot of the woods during daytime , but it will be filmed during the evening
.
By Zainab :) ( with the makeup done by the girls )
Thursday, 20 January 2011
More music possibilties?!
This is "how i dissapear" by My Chemical Romance ,i thought it could be another music posibility perhaps? As it suits our genre and creates a notion of darkness as well with its intense drums.
Harpreet xoxo
Makeup (mise en scene)
Makeup! okay our makeup for Rose will include:
- Pale foundation
- Baby powder
- Eyeliner
- Red lipstick
- Bronzer
All of this will help to create our achieved effect on Zainab,as it creates a villain type aspect of the character.There will be more of an emphasis on the eyes as they will more focus on them.
-Harpreet-
- Pale foundation
- Baby powder
- Eyeliner
- Red lipstick
- Bronzer
All of this will help to create our achieved effect on Zainab,as it creates a villain type aspect of the character.There will be more of an emphasis on the eyes as they will more focus on them.
-Harpreet-
Lighting-effects
The Lighting effects will include the folllowing:
- A torch
- Led lights
-Flood lights?
The use of a torch will help to create shdows on the main protagonist face,(Rose) ,this will achieve a notion of darkness and death,which is conventional in a Horror film.
Led or Flood lights will create high focus and intensity on all of our faces,which will give it a more professional look.
Our lighting is low key lighting obviously,which adds a darker dimension to it.
-Harpreet- xoxo
- A torch
- Led lights
-Flood lights?
The use of a torch will help to create shdows on the main protagonist face,(Rose) ,this will achieve a notion of darkness and death,which is conventional in a Horror film.
Led or Flood lights will create high focus and intensity on all of our faces,which will give it a more professional look.
Our lighting is low key lighting obviously,which adds a darker dimension to it.
-Harpreet- xoxo
Dark knight!
Trailer Analysis
Dark knight
Hey guys this movie is the perfect example of creating a thriller! it has everything which will give us sooooo many idea about creating the best Horror/thriller trailer!
It has fast aced cuts as well as cross cutting ,which will helps to acheive supense and gain momentum.This is what we need in our production too!!
Dark knight
Hey guys this movie is the perfect example of creating a thriller! it has everything which will give us sooooo many idea about creating the best Horror/thriller trailer!
It has fast aced cuts as well as cross cutting ,which will helps to acheive supense and gain momentum.This is what we need in our production too!!
Harpreet xoxo
Soundtrack
Hiyyaaaaa! this is the music we are gonna use!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dstFO-4qzl0
Bang bang Bang bang - Soho Dolls is going to be used when the shot gets all intense in the trailer ,and it introduces itself into the dilemma. Also it creates suspense and tension as it invokes dark/murderous emotions.
And now this is the opening music;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c72kRV03_vE
Darling Violetta - i want to kill you
This music is suitable for the opening scene ,as it foreshadows the dark,creepiness that lies within the trailer.
-
Harpreet-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dstFO-4qzl0
Bang bang Bang bang - Soho Dolls is going to be used when the shot gets all intense in the trailer ,and it introduces itself into the dilemma. Also it creates suspense and tension as it invokes dark/murderous emotions.
And now this is the opening music;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c72kRV03_vE
Darling Violetta - i want to kill you
This music is suitable for the opening scene ,as it foreshadows the dark,creepiness that lies within the trailer.
-
Harpreet-
Production Intentions sheet
Target Audience : Our group checkmate have mainly chose the target audience of 15-17 year olds , this is because they are one of the biggest mainstream audiences in the UK for horror/thriller films . The film will be targeted at those whom mainly are interested in twilight, the omen and etc. The film trailer will mainly target young teenage girls , however the added visual effects and gun shots , plus the violence will probably attract a male audience as well . Men at that particular age love to watch anything that contains scenes of hanging , shots, blood and swearing .The Socio Economic Group for this trailer is E because its mainly aimed at teenagers , but would not be suited towards families ! , as the film trailer is rated 15 not 12 !.
Setting :
There will be three primary settings for this film trailer , firstly in the drama studio , as we want to create an sense of dynamic tension , through the use of under lighting and torches , plus naturalistic lighting as well . Time will be portrayed via the use of , daytime scenes for the school sections with the main character Rose walking through the gates of the school building . Some scenes will be filled in the woods , this is because many gangster films and horror films take place in woods .Also mystery can be created, and if a person does get murdered then it’s very hard to find the culprit for it . Which is why the use of the woods will be done during evening time or sunrise (if possible) .Narrative of our story is that a new young school teenager ( rose ) , her best friend is killed by a main culprit who will not be revealed until the whole trailer has been finished . Basically our target audience has to work this out !.
Characters:
Rose –Zainab
Willow –Harpreet
Nicole – Ferhiyo
Kate – Sivagowsi
Lena – Soniqua
Things to do :
Light art is a cool way to express yourself… or just make some pretty cool light images. Starting out with light art can be tricky, but as long as you have the right equipment and the determination, you'll be making a light art masterpiece in no time.
All you'll need is a camera with an adjustable shutter speed (set to slow shutter speed), and small, portable lights (more the funner). Be creative with whatever you choose to draw and your setting. This can be done anywhere, as long as light conditions are right
See more: How to create your own light art with camera and lights | Video « Wonder How To http://www.wonderhowto.com/how-to-create-your-own-light-art-with-camera-and-lights-379073/#ixzz1BOKr6WMV
-Zainab-
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